Lecture 03: Plot Part 2

make outlines like this

character

  • Kaladin
    • who are they
    • arc 1
    • arc 2
  • Shallan
  • Dalinar
  • Szeth
  • side characters
    • blah

setting

  • magic/tech
  • worldbuilding physical
  • cultural

plot

plot archetype

Mistborn:

  • heist
  • master & apprentice plot
  • information plot
  • relationship

Ocean’s eleven

  • gather a team
  • one newbie
  • explain the problem/plot
  • scene showing bank place and splitting the plan into different pieces
  • missing piece
  • twist - the newbie is surprised by the others knowing how to solve the missing piece already

The Italian job

  • problems A B C D
  • solve them with solutions 1 2 3 4
  • but at the end we have problems E F G H
  • scramble up the solutions ie 1 solves F, 2 solves H etc - safe cracker can break into a car

how does Brandon make an outline

plan by section and idea, when sitting down to write, pull the ideas from the relevant sections

relationship

  • steps….
    • scene showing person A competence in one area but missing something specific
    • scene showing person B opposite to this
    • why do they not get together immediately? - Montague vs Capulet
    • first meet second meet disasters
    • discovery of admirations
    • braiding roses together
    • thorns move from pointing at each other to outsiders

mystery

steps of how we get there

  • blah

Hero’s Journey / Monomyth

  • character at home
  • call to adventure
  • refusal of the call
  • journey into the unknown
  • trials and tribulations
  • mentor
  • mentor dies
  • descent into the underworld
  • apotheosis
  • atonement
  • reward with the elixir
  • return with the elixir

3 act structure

  • transition from act 1 to 2:
  • character goes from inactive to proactive - “i will go do this”
  • transition from act 2 to 3 - low point
  • twist in the middle
  • rising action increasing stakes and tension

discovery writing

stephen king

george r r martin

  • Yes but, no and - create motion where something is always going wrong for the character